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No Quarter

Close the door, put out the light.
You know they won\'t be home tonight.


Up and down your fingers crawled
Along that fret boarded road
Two steps forward
Three more to go
So let’s slow it down
Just a little more

The snow falls hard and don\'t you know?
The winds of Thor are blowing cold.


Harmonies of voices scream to you the truth
Singing to you of tales mocked
One word heard
Five after ignored
So open your ears more
Just listen to your pain

They\'re wearing steel that\'s bright and true
They carry news that must get through.


Faithful messenger comes to the fork in the road
Traveling for the sake of dreams
Gave blood and sweat
Only tears to go
So pay your life
Lonely solider

They choose the path where no-one goes.
They hold no quarter.
©2003-2009 ~saro-n-mizary
:iconsaro-n-mizary:

Author's Comments

Well...
I havent slept yet
and i decided to try and do this for the song of the month on:
It's not great
i know...
but you never know
someone might like it

Inspired solely from the song "No Quarter" by Led Zeppelin

God the guitar...the keyboard...everything...such a gorgeous song

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:icondazedandconfused:
It's nice, but it seems a tad bit scattered, and the rhythm ain't too good. Not your best, Mary. But still nice.

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Without creation, there is death
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Either write things worth reading or do things worth writing
:iconminister-of-dark:
i like all the references to music in this one.

They're wearing steel that's bright and true
They carry news that must get through.

the italics lines really add efect to it.

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The only bad thing about being the best looking person ever, is that you have to go out with someone uglier than you.

:iconsaro-n-mizary: :iconlost-mister-me: :iconshigo:
:iconlost-mister-me:
up late at night playing guitar not being able to sleep and so you write instead. sounds EXACTLY like me. lol.

i like this part here:
Faithful messenger comes to the fork in the road
Traveling for the sake of dreams
Gave blood and sweat
Only tears to go
So pay your life
Lonely solider

that has to be the best......awesome job.

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"If you can't get someone out of your head, maybe they're supposed to be there."
"She walks away and he faithfully follows."
:iconpsicopoldo:
ooh... I like it... has a strange rythm, but the words are.. great!... very medieval, me likes it!!!... ;) (Wink) check mine out anyway ;) (Wink) heehee...
(I'm kinda stupid so I can't make links, sorry... heheh)

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- all you need is love
The Beatles
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this ain't rock'n'roll! this is genocide!! ~davidbowie~ ledzeppelin
visit me other halfs! ~ surrealpoldo~rainsymphony~ zabriske-point~gabikaze
:iconvespera:
The wording is great, great images and ideas, but work a little more rhythm into it!

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Your musky lips, cramping smoke into halos,
love to finger obscenities and slander. I am a bitch now.
Don’t touch her now, this thing of waste. She’s
Empty. She’s full of spite.
:iconseekingtruth:
I too like the references to music...

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"Never apologize for showing feeling. When you do so, you apologize for truth." -Disraeli
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Thanks is nice, but a comment is better!
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:mwahaha:p|-|3412!!!:mwahaha:
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:crazy::eyepopping:Keep smiling!:stab::slow:
:iconeternalwanderer:
Vespera stole what I was going to say. Grrrrr. And I am too tired to try and think of more. Sorry. But yeah, this is wonderful. It reminds me once again that they really need to add an audio section to DA.

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